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Title: Jeremy's journey
Original title: The Hollow of Kadic
Rating: PG-13
Author's notes: I edited my fanfiction. It's different than the original one. Please enjoy my fanfic. I do not own Code Lyoko or the characters.
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CHAPTER 1: DEATH
LOCATION: KADIC JUNIOR HIGH SCHOOL (10:31 PM)
Everybody else except Jeremy Belpois is asleep, the blond-haired teenager is sitting in front of his computer. The intelligent teenager is creating important programs that he might be able to use to defeat his enemy, Xana.
Jeremy Belpois is a thirteen year old boy with blue eyes and golden-blond hair. He is dressed in dark blue pajamas. Jeremy Belpois is the smartest kid in Kadic, and he is the leader of the Lyoko Warriors.
Everything was peaceful, he smiled to himself and concentrated on his work. He did not hear someone open his wooden door. A pink-haired girl named Aelita quietly opened the door and she entered Jeremy's room, she is wearing a sleepy expression on her pale face.
Aelita Schaffer is skinny girl with light-pink hair, bright green eyes. She is wearing a pink shirt with a red "a" embroidered in her chic shirt and tan shorts. Jeremy turned around and he saw her.
"Hello Aelita. What are you doing here?" he asked in a surprised tone.
Aelita was trembling, sweat trickled down her face.
"Jeremy, I had a t-terrible nightmare…it seemed so real." Aelita whispered softly, she lowered her head.
Jeremy glanced at her face, large tears were streaming down her cheeks. Jeremy walked up to the pink-haired girl and he gave her gave her a gentle hug.
"What did you dream about." asked Jeremy, he was still holding her in his arms.
"M-my father's death. Xana's monsters killed my father." Aelita said, sobbing.
Jeremy looked at her with a gentle expression and he kept hugging her.
"Don't worry Aelita! I'll save Franz and I will find a way to destroy Xana." Jeremy promised.
Suddenly… Jeremy's computer started to beep, the sudden sound made Aelita and Jeremy jump with a startled expression. The blond-haired boy let go of Aelita and he stared at his computer, Xana activated a tower.
Jeremy could not help but feel annoyed, these night attacks were getting really bothersome.
"Oh no. Xana has activated a tower in the mountain sector." Aelita said in a tired tone, Jeremy realized she hadn't slept for a single hour.
"We should go tell Odd and Ulrich the bad news." said Jeremy.
Aelita nodded in agreement.
They quietly slipped out of Jeremy's room and they made their way to Ulrich's dorm room. Aelita looked around to make sure Jim wasn't there. Jeremy slowly opened the door and they entered the dark room.
Odd was lying on his bed, snoring like a loud animal. Odd's dog, Kiwi was sleeping next to him. Ulrich was awake, the brown-haired boy stared at his friends.
Aelita shook Odd but he didn't wake up, she tried again and this time she exerted more force. Odd's eyes popped open, the drowsy teenager rubbed his eyes.
"Huh? What're you guys doing here?" Odd asked with a sleepy expression.
"Xana activated a tower, we have to go to the factory." said Jeremy.
"Damn. I hate it when Xana activates towers when I'm asleep." Odd said in an annoyed tone. Ulrich nodded in agreement.
Aelita took her cell phone out of her pocket and she called Yumi.
"Yumi, meet us at the factory ASAP. Xana activated a tower." said Aelita.
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The Lyoko Warriors were inside the cylinder scanners, they were ready to be sent to Lyoko. Jeremy started the program.
"Transfer" said Jeremy.
A bright red light surrounded the teenagers.
"Scanner"
The Lyoko Warriors in the scanners began to float, a sapphire light scanned them.
"Virtualization."
FLASH!
The Lyoko Warriors slowly materialized into the virtual world. Jeremy sent them their vehicles.
"The tower is being guarded by twelve Tarantulas." Jeremy warned his friends. His friends were adept fighters but the Tarantulas were quite adept themselves.
Jeremy stroked his keyboard with his pointer hand.
"Hmm…I wonder what Xana is going to do this time."
The blond-haired boy heard an odd sound behind him. Jeremy spun around and saw a black blob, it was one of Xana's specters! It took the shape of a tall man dressed in a black suit and dark sunglasses. The specter did not look happy.
"Oh no." Jeremy said with a with a startled expression. Cold sweat was trickling down his face.
The specter sprinted toward Jeremy, he raised his muscular and punched the teenager in the stomach. Jeremy coughed up blood and he stumbled toward a wall. The blond-haired boy glanced at the elevator before he hit the wall.
"I…I have to get out of here."
Jeremy did not want Xana's specter to damage the computer because his friends were still in Lyoko. He had to force the specter out of the computer room.
"You can't catch me, you stupid specter!" Jeremy shouted, he bolted toward the elevator.
The specter leapt after the teenager. Jeremy pushed the crimson button and the elevator doors closed. The specter tries to electrocute Jeremy but he fails because Jeremy kicks the specter in the face and the blow causes the specter to collapse. The elevator stops and the doors slide open, Jeremy tries to run away from the furious specter but he does not manage to get very far because the specter lunges toward the blond-haired teenager and he kicks Jeremy in the spine.
CRACK.
Jeremy lands against a dirty wall. The specter walks up to the injured Jeremy and grabs him by the neck and he lifts him up, the specter brutally tosses Jeremy back to the metallic floor. Jeremy wanted to scream but he bit his lip instead.
"The specter is enjoying this!"
The specter stomps on Jeremy's arm. Jeremy's bones shatter, he lets out a loud scream.
"Hmph."
The specter removes it foot from Jeremy's arm and he glares at the teenager.
"You will not ruin lord Xana's plans ever again, you stupid child." the specter said, coldly.
The specter smirks evilly and he stomps on Jeremy's stomach five times, blood pours out Jeremy's mouth. His internal organs were bleeding, his organs could not handle this kind of abuse.
"No! Stop! said Jeremy, trembling.
The specter's human hand transforms into a gnarled hand with long-sharp talons. The evil specter grabs Jeremy hair with his normal hand and he lifts Jeremy up.
"Die." the specter said hatefully.
The specter thrusts his claws into Jeremy's chest, his talons damage Jeremy's lungs. More blood seeps out of his injuries. The specter snickers and he takes his clawed hand out Jeremy's chest. Jeremy screams of agony please the sadistic specter. The blond-haired teenager faints.
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In Lyoko Aelita enters the activated tower. She phases through the tower's wall, she levitates and lands on the round platform. A rectangular interface appears in front of her, the pink-haired girl puts her hand on it.
…CODE LYOKO…
"Tower deactivated." Aelita whispered.
The tower's red fog changes into its normal pale blue color.
Aelita and the others know that something happened to Jeremy. So…they devitalized each other.
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Jeremy was lying on the cold floor, he was covered with his own blood and he was slowly dying.
"Jeremy!" Aelita said with a shocked expression, tears were streaming down her face.
The pink-haired girl falls on her knees in front the dying Jeremy, she stared at his face.
His face is covered in gashes and blood; and his body was even more injured than his face. He tried to smile but the pain did not allow him to do that.
"I-I'm sorry Aelita…I w-wont be able to keep my promise." Jeremy said in a sad tone. Everything was getting blurry.
Aelita shook her head.
"Don't say that Jeremy! We are going to save you!" Aelita said, she put Jeremy's head on her lap.
But Jeremy wasn't going to live.
"Farewell…my love."
"No! Don't give up!" Aelita screamed.
Jeremy closes his eyes, his injured heart stops beating.
"No! Don't leave me!"
Aelita doesn't notice the invisible gray chains wrapped around her arm…these chains are anchored to Jeremy's chest. The blond-haired boy is floating next to Aelita, he is feeling guilt.
"I'm very sorry Aelita. I-I wont be able to free your father." The spirit Jeremy said in a sad tone.
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CHAIN OF FATE: The Chain of Fate is what binds souls to their living body.
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To be continued!
Original title: The Hollow of Kadic
Rating: PG-13
Author's notes: I edited my fanfiction. It's different than the original one. Please enjoy my fanfic. I do not own Code Lyoko or the characters.
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CHAPTER 1: DEATH
LOCATION: KADIC JUNIOR HIGH SCHOOL (10:31 PM)
Everybody else except Jeremy Belpois is asleep, the blond-haired teenager is sitting in front of his computer. The intelligent teenager is creating important programs that he might be able to use to defeat his enemy, Xana.
Jeremy Belpois is a thirteen year old boy with blue eyes and golden-blond hair. He is dressed in dark blue pajamas. Jeremy Belpois is the smartest kid in Kadic, and he is the leader of the Lyoko Warriors.
Everything was peaceful, he smiled to himself and concentrated on his work. He did not hear someone open his wooden door. A pink-haired girl named Aelita quietly opened the door and she entered Jeremy's room, she is wearing a sleepy expression on her pale face.
Aelita Schaffer is skinny girl with light-pink hair, bright green eyes. She is wearing a pink shirt with a red "a" embroidered in her chic shirt and tan shorts. Jeremy turned around and he saw her.
"Hello Aelita. What are you doing here?" he asked in a surprised tone.
Aelita was trembling, sweat trickled down her face.
"Jeremy, I had a t-terrible nightmare…it seemed so real." Aelita whispered softly, she lowered her head.
Jeremy glanced at her face, large tears were streaming down her cheeks. Jeremy walked up to the pink-haired girl and he gave her gave her a gentle hug.
"What did you dream about." asked Jeremy, he was still holding her in his arms.
"M-my father's death. Xana's monsters killed my father." Aelita said, sobbing.
Jeremy looked at her with a gentle expression and he kept hugging her.
"Don't worry Aelita! I'll save Franz and I will find a way to destroy Xana." Jeremy promised.
Suddenly… Jeremy's computer started to beep, the sudden sound made Aelita and Jeremy jump with a startled expression. The blond-haired boy let go of Aelita and he stared at his computer, Xana activated a tower.
Jeremy could not help but feel annoyed, these night attacks were getting really bothersome.
"Oh no. Xana has activated a tower in the mountain sector." Aelita said in a tired tone, Jeremy realized she hadn't slept for a single hour.
"We should go tell Odd and Ulrich the bad news." said Jeremy.
Aelita nodded in agreement.
They quietly slipped out of Jeremy's room and they made their way to Ulrich's dorm room. Aelita looked around to make sure Jim wasn't there. Jeremy slowly opened the door and they entered the dark room.
Odd was lying on his bed, snoring like a loud animal. Odd's dog, Kiwi was sleeping next to him. Ulrich was awake, the brown-haired boy stared at his friends.
Aelita shook Odd but he didn't wake up, she tried again and this time she exerted more force. Odd's eyes popped open, the drowsy teenager rubbed his eyes.
"Huh? What're you guys doing here?" Odd asked with a sleepy expression.
"Xana activated a tower, we have to go to the factory." said Jeremy.
"Damn. I hate it when Xana activates towers when I'm asleep." Odd said in an annoyed tone. Ulrich nodded in agreement.
Aelita took her cell phone out of her pocket and she called Yumi.
"Yumi, meet us at the factory ASAP. Xana activated a tower." said Aelita.
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The Lyoko Warriors were inside the cylinder scanners, they were ready to be sent to Lyoko. Jeremy started the program.
"Transfer" said Jeremy.
A bright red light surrounded the teenagers.
"Scanner"
The Lyoko Warriors in the scanners began to float, a sapphire light scanned them.
"Virtualization."
FLASH!
The Lyoko Warriors slowly materialized into the virtual world. Jeremy sent them their vehicles.
"The tower is being guarded by twelve Tarantulas." Jeremy warned his friends. His friends were adept fighters but the Tarantulas were quite adept themselves.
Jeremy stroked his keyboard with his pointer hand.
"Hmm…I wonder what Xana is going to do this time."
The blond-haired boy heard an odd sound behind him. Jeremy spun around and saw a black blob, it was one of Xana's specters! It took the shape of a tall man dressed in a black suit and dark sunglasses. The specter did not look happy.
"Oh no." Jeremy said with a with a startled expression. Cold sweat was trickling down his face.
The specter sprinted toward Jeremy, he raised his muscular and punched the teenager in the stomach. Jeremy coughed up blood and he stumbled toward a wall. The blond-haired boy glanced at the elevator before he hit the wall.
"I…I have to get out of here."
Jeremy did not want Xana's specter to damage the computer because his friends were still in Lyoko. He had to force the specter out of the computer room.
"You can't catch me, you stupid specter!" Jeremy shouted, he bolted toward the elevator.
The specter leapt after the teenager. Jeremy pushed the crimson button and the elevator doors closed. The specter tries to electrocute Jeremy but he fails because Jeremy kicks the specter in the face and the blow causes the specter to collapse. The elevator stops and the doors slide open, Jeremy tries to run away from the furious specter but he does not manage to get very far because the specter lunges toward the blond-haired teenager and he kicks Jeremy in the spine.
CRACK.
Jeremy lands against a dirty wall. The specter walks up to the injured Jeremy and grabs him by the neck and he lifts him up, the specter brutally tosses Jeremy back to the metallic floor. Jeremy wanted to scream but he bit his lip instead.
"The specter is enjoying this!"
The specter stomps on Jeremy's arm. Jeremy's bones shatter, he lets out a loud scream.
"Hmph."
The specter removes it foot from Jeremy's arm and he glares at the teenager.
"You will not ruin lord Xana's plans ever again, you stupid child." the specter said, coldly.
The specter smirks evilly and he stomps on Jeremy's stomach five times, blood pours out Jeremy's mouth. His internal organs were bleeding, his organs could not handle this kind of abuse.
"No! Stop! said Jeremy, trembling.
The specter's human hand transforms into a gnarled hand with long-sharp talons. The evil specter grabs Jeremy hair with his normal hand and he lifts Jeremy up.
"Die." the specter said hatefully.
The specter thrusts his claws into Jeremy's chest, his talons damage Jeremy's lungs. More blood seeps out of his injuries. The specter snickers and he takes his clawed hand out Jeremy's chest. Jeremy screams of agony please the sadistic specter. The blond-haired teenager faints.
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In Lyoko Aelita enters the activated tower. She phases through the tower's wall, she levitates and lands on the round platform. A rectangular interface appears in front of her, the pink-haired girl puts her hand on it.
…CODE LYOKO…
"Tower deactivated." Aelita whispered.
The tower's red fog changes into its normal pale blue color.
Aelita and the others know that something happened to Jeremy. So…they devitalized each other.
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Jeremy was lying on the cold floor, he was covered with his own blood and he was slowly dying.
"Jeremy!" Aelita said with a shocked expression, tears were streaming down her face.
The pink-haired girl falls on her knees in front the dying Jeremy, she stared at his face.
His face is covered in gashes and blood; and his body was even more injured than his face. He tried to smile but the pain did not allow him to do that.
"I-I'm sorry Aelita…I w-wont be able to keep my promise." Jeremy said in a sad tone. Everything was getting blurry.
Aelita shook her head.
"Don't say that Jeremy! We are going to save you!" Aelita said, she put Jeremy's head on her lap.
But Jeremy wasn't going to live.
"Farewell…my love."
"No! Don't give up!" Aelita screamed.
Jeremy closes his eyes, his injured heart stops beating.
"No! Don't leave me!"
Aelita doesn't notice the invisible gray chains wrapped around her arm…these chains are anchored to Jeremy's chest. The blond-haired boy is floating next to Aelita, he is feeling guilt.
"I'm very sorry Aelita. I-I wont be able to free your father." The spirit Jeremy said in a sad tone.
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CHAIN OF FATE: The Chain of Fate is what binds souls to their living body.
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To be continued!
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Omg i love it it is so epic.I imagene it like a video game!